Answer:
Is this supposed to be a poem? If so, it needs improvement.
Explanation:
Usually a poem has rhythm, it's a good start but it needs more flow. I would also suggest making it rhyme. I've attempted to give you some ideas but I am by no means a poet.
Depression is a dreadfull place
I very so wish this wasn't the case
I write my letter of regrets and pace
Although, I don't want to leave this space
It feels like sorrow, the feeling goes right through me
Oh what a bitter taste, in the afternoon he
I wish you luck!
