I'd appreciate some help, tell me what you think, thanks!:



(also, this is kinda of a song, partly a rap) - Hope you enjoy.

Would you like me if a take that?

Drug myself so I don't wake up?

I don't want to start another day cuz.

I think everything just hates us.


I'll just burrow sorrow in a song.

I know it's myself and me that don't get along.

Maybe next morning I'll give up.

Go to sleep and not breathe at all.


Is it one for all, or all of us?

What've I done so wrong to be messed up.

The only thing I won't do is love.

I don't want to get attached with my heart.

I want to go to bed not being broken.

Start the day out in the open.

Wish I'd pray more about my hopes but.

I think everything just really hates us.