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our strict safety policy forbids us from renting power equipment to anyone who cannot demonstrate proficiency in its use.

Respuesta :

The sentence has been revised to emphasize the You View as follows:

  • For your safety, you need to demonstrate proficiency in the use of power equipment that you wish to rent.

What is the You View?

The You View is a form of writing that emphasizes the welfare of the reader so that they can more clearly see how the matter affects them.

When a text is written from the You View, the reader will be moved to adhere to the guidelines because they can see how the matter in question affects them. in the revised version of the text, we can see that the benefit of safety is clearly shown to the reader.

Since his welfare is prioritized, the reader will be more moved to develop proficiency in the use of power tools if they do not want any complicated problems. Some words that can be used to emphasize the You View are; You, I, we, your, our, and mine. The word, You is evident in the text.

Complete Question:

Revise the following sentence to emphasize the perspective of the audience and the “you” view.

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